Wednesday, July 24, 2013

A "Free" Haiku

A "Free" Haiku
climbing high and far
from the heat, noise and worries
naked in a tree

3 comments:

  1. precious haiku!
    clear idea and words!

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  2. Thank you Mrs B. I challenged myself to try it in both forms. I still can't say if I like one more than the other. I wonder if this is what being a parent feels like.

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  3. exactly! your 5 lines poem is beautiful but this haiku is very different

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